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Post by Nancyd021410 on Jun 15, 2008 20:51:50 GMT -6
WOW, girlfriend, that's awesome. I didn't know you had those kinda talents as well. Your a lady with many hidden secrets!!!!! That was very beautiful. Have you ever showed that to Dino? He LOVES to read lyrics and see things like this. Very nice very nice
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Post by LMC on Jun 16, 2008 4:09:37 GMT -6
thanks cheza and nancy! nopers...i've never showed him.
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Post by Nancyd021410 on Jun 16, 2008 5:54:39 GMT -6
thanks cheza and nancy! nopers...i've never showed him. =] Will you? I'm SERIOUS!!! It would make him happy to read good things
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Post by Levis12 on Jun 16, 2008 7:06:12 GMT -6
LMC.... Just Awesome!
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Post by LMC on Jun 16, 2008 13:40:53 GMT -6
thanks levis!
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Post by LMC on Jun 16, 2008 13:42:05 GMT -6
thanks cheza and nancy! nopers...i've never showed him. =] Will you? I'm SERIOUS!!! It would make him happy to read good things should i PM it to him here or at lh.com or... =]
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Post by Nancyd021410 on Jun 16, 2008 17:08:07 GMT -6
Will you? I'm SERIOUS!!! It would make him happy to read good things should i PM it to him here or at lh.com or... =] He doesn't check his PM's here, he told me that years ago. Do it on his myspace, he checks that daily, if not A HUNDRED times every day
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Post by Cheza on Jun 16, 2008 17:39:26 GMT -6
Here's a pretty personal poem, but it's one of the pieces I put in the anthology at the retreat...free verse...most of my poetry does not rhyme. Uninvited Guest [/i] Can it really be almost 14 years? Yet you’re still with me - An uninvited guest. How did I get selected to be your host? At age 20, you surely weren’t supposed to join me. A flaming hot, grinding left knee started it all. Blown up like a balloon, almost immobile Tears flowed unending from the fountain of my eyes Pain, tests, effusions, scary words, X-rays, pills, shots … Next stop - an IV? Let’s not. In later years, you wouldn’t let me hold the camera or a pen at times Not normally anyway - modifications had to be made. Fingers frozen like icicles - But looking like stuffed sausages - Made it hard to do these things Along with the fiery fingers came: Cracking shoulders, Crunching ankles, And snapping jaws, Which became your favorite party spots. You are relentless once you decide to rear your head. Moments of peace, shattered by my uninvited guest… I pray you will stay away; That the medications will keep you subdued. But at least you let me know when it will rain. [/center]
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Post by Nancyd021410 on Jun 16, 2008 17:48:07 GMT -6
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Post by Cheza on Jun 16, 2008 17:48:49 GMT -6
Bringing over another anthology piece...posted it at one of the other boards, but I thought I'd share it here too... This is the only way I could figure out how to get my columns for parallel...by alternating. This is the parallel poem - you can read it across or down each column individually and it makes sense. The last two lines go with both columns when reading them individually. The photo at the bottom is one I took a few years back of the shed the poem discusses.Mr. Pfeiffer’s Shed Secluded from the world a peaceful scene Your beauty belies your reality that hides a secret Paul Pfeiffer had a special use for you an explosive one Most people probably don’t realize you exist tucked away in the woods Nestled among Matilda’s trees some do notice Those who do just think you are a lovely, little retreat little do they know They know Ernest taught Pauline how to shoot on the property They know her father had farms your secret was safe Karl and Matilda built a home here she preserved your setting What they don’t know is you played a key part in Pfeiffer history - holding the dynamite needed to eliminate stumps on the Pfeiffer farms
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Post by Nancyd021410 on Jun 16, 2008 17:58:39 GMT -6
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Post by Cheza on Jun 16, 2008 18:15:56 GMT -6
Thanks, Ms. Nancy....I really do need a lil' blushy dude.
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Post by LMC on Jun 16, 2008 18:33:05 GMT -6
awesome cheza! that second one is really cool!
=]
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Post by LMC on Jun 16, 2008 18:39:56 GMT -6
YO NANCY. i shared the poem with dino.
=]
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Post by Nancyd021410 on Jun 16, 2008 18:58:17 GMT -6
YO NANCY. i shared the poem with dino. =] It will make him smile!!!!! thanks
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